Tips to write a 9 Band Essay | Ielts writing band 7+ Tips
There are different types of essays. Mentioned below are the various types of essays and how to write a 9 band essay. First of all one has to understand the question. Then do a brain storming to develop the ideas for the essay. Once the planning is completed then start writing the essay as discussed below.
1. Opinion essays
a) Opinion 1 – Agree/Disagree.
b) Opinion 2 – ls this a positive or negative development.
c) Opinion 3 -Are the advantages more than the disadvantages.
2. Discussion essays
3. Advantage and disadvantage essays
4. Problem and solution essays
5. Direct question essays (some might be two part questions)
Some important things to note
1. Contractions are not allowed (he’s, she’s, can’t, won’t).
2. Don’t use informal language. However, you are writing for an educated non-specialist audience. Therefore, your language does not need to be as formal as that of university essays.
3. Always paraphrase or use synonyms when possible. Never copy the topic while writing the introduction.
4. Avoid using templates or memorized items for intro. Such templates can take a person from 4 to 5 or 5.5, but if your aim is 6 or above, these templates cannot help you. A simple but original introduction befitting the question asked will be better.
5. No clichés. For example, instead of writing ‘every coin has two sides’, it is better to write ‘every argument has two sides’.
6. lt is good to write complex sentences, but if the examiner has to read your sentence again to see what you mean, then it goes against you. So, write complex but clearly understood sentences. Avoid too long sentences.
7. ln most cases you are expected to give your opinion. You may also have to include your life experience and relevant examples to support your opinion.
8. The topics of the IELTS writing questions are supposed to be of general interest, and they claim that no specialist knowledge is required. But it would be worthwhile to go through points of topics like telecommuting, gap year, genetically modified foods, globalization, rote learning, and many more. I believe that if you don’t have ideas, even the best of language skills will not help you achieve your desired score. ldeas for some 1OO such topics have been included in the speaking book, which is recommended along with this book for IELTS Coaching.
9. Do not copy whole sentences or long phrases from the question. The examiner will recognize them, and they will not count towards your minimum number of words you must write.
10. The introduction should be approximately 35-50 words long. lt is unnecessary for you to write a long introduction because it is the body that you need to focus on.
Opinion essay
General information
An opinion essay is a formal academic essay, which requires you to state your opinion (usually “agree or disagree”) on a given topic. You need to provide reasons and supporting details to convince the examiner of your answer.
There are 2 common approaches to write an opinion essay: 1 sided and balanced.
One-sided approach
# A one-sided essay is an essay where your opinion is completely inclined to only one side of the argument, which means you either completely agree or completely disagree with the issue given in the topic.
# Always give 2 to 3 reasons to support your opinion, each of which must be analyzed and supported by specific details in each of the two or three paragraphs in the body.
# You can also give two reasons to support your opinion, and the third paragraph can contain the opponents’ opinion with your refutation. ln either case it will be a totally agree or disagree essay.
Let’s see the complete structure of the one-sided opinion essay.
Body:
Introduction
• Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
• Sentence 2: State whether you completely agree or disagree with the issue.
First body paragraph:
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 1st idea)
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
Second body paragraph:
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 2nd idea) .
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
Third body paragraph: (optional)
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 3’d idea) OR the opponents view
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the arguments of opposite view and then refute with your view idea OR Give
Conclusion:
Restate your opinion that you completely agree or completely disagree with the issue given in the question
Balanced Opinion Essay
General information
- A balanced essay is an essay where you are inclined to one side of the argument but you do not deny the other side, which means you partly agree or partly disagree with the issue given in the topic.
- BUT – Never sit on the fence,
- Even if you accept that there are 2 sides of the argument, you still need to choose which one you would agree more.
- You need to analyze both sides of the issue and state which side you are in favor of at the same time.
- There are 2 places where you need to give you opinion: the intro, and the conclusion.
Let’s see the complete structure of a balanced opinion essay.
Introduction:
Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
Sentence 2: State that you partially agree or disagree with the issue. You can also say that you are more inclined on one side.
Body:
First body paragraph:
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 1″ idea) .
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
Second body paragraph:
Sentence 1: The topic sentence (your 2nd idea)
Sentence 2-5/6: Give SPECIFIC examples or explanations to support the idea
Third body porogroph: (Optionol)
Sentence 1: Your idea of the other view. But you can again say that you are more in favor of the first view even if this point also holds some water.
Conclusion
Restate your opinion that although both sides of the issue have solid arguments, which you agree upon, the arguments of one side are definitely more overpowering than the other
Discussion essay
General information
Discussion essay is a formal academic essay where you are asked to discuss 2 sides of a given argument. The task may or may not ask for your opinion on the issue, only give your opinion if the task requires so. Try to find 2 ideas for each side of the argument.
Let’s see the complete structure of a discussion essay:
Introduction
• Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
• Sentence 2: Write a thesis statement saying that you will discuss both sides of the argument
Body
First paragraph: the first side of the argument
• Sentence 1: the topic sentence
• Sentence 2-5/6: Give 2 reasons and use SPECIFIC examples and explanations to support those reasons
Second paragraph: The second side of the argument.
• Sentence 1: the topic sentence
• Sentence 2-5/6: give 2 reasons and use SPECIFIC examples and explanations to support those reasons
Conclusion: The restatement: restate your opinion
IMPORTANT: A discussion essay versus a balanced opinion essay
A lot of people have a difficult time differentiating between these 2 particular types of the essay since both of them require students to present 2 sides of the given argument with the same way of writing. However, the difference is that in a balanced opinion essay, you have to write about WHAT YOU THINK, whereas, in a discussion essay you have to write about WHAT OTHER PEOPLE THINK. This means there is a difference in the proper language you can use in each type.
In a balanced opinion essay
• You can use phrases to express your own opinion like “I think”, “I believe”, “I agree” wherever you want.
• You can give examples of your own knowledge or experiences such as your family, your
friends or a particular event you participated in to support your ideas In a discussion essay
• You can use the typical language for a discussion to express other people’s opinion such as “people think”, “people believe”, “it is believed/considered”
• You can NOT give examples of your own knowledge or experiences.
Advantage & Disadvantage Essays
General information
Basically, an advantage/disadvantage essay is a discussion essay that asks you to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of a given issue, for example, the advantages and disadvantages of using public transport. Do NOT give any opinions if you are not asked to. Divide your body into 2 separate paragraphs, each of which develops either the advantages or disadvantages of the given issue.
Let’s see the complete structure of advantages & disadvantages essay:
Introduction
• Sentence L; Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
• Sentence 2: Answer the question
Body
First paragraph:
• Sentence 1: The topic sentence (advantages or disadvantages)
• Sentence 2-5/6: 2 advantages or disadvantages
Second paragraph:
• Sentence 1: The topic sentence (advantages or disadvantages)
• Sentence 2-5/6: 2 advantages or disadvantages
Third paragraph: optional (but on the same lines)
Conclusion: The restatement: Restate your answer
Note: If
the task asks for your opinion or your favorable side then state your opinion
Problem/Solution or Cause Effect Essays
General information
Such essays ask you to discuss the causes and solutions/effects of a given issue. For example the causes and solutions/effects of overpopulation. DO NOT give any opinions if you are not asked to.
Your cause & effect/solution essays would be structured as follows:
Introduction
• Sentence 1: Paraphrase the background information given in the topic
• Sentence 2: Answer the question
Body
Firstparagraph:
• Sentence 1: The topic sentence (the causes of the given issue)
• Sentence 2-5/6: Explain in detail 2 causes
Second paragraph:
• Sentence 1: The topic sentence (the effects or solutions of the given issue)
• Sentence 2-5/6: Explain in detail 2 effects/solutions
Thirdparagraph: (Optional)
• You can add a third paragraph at the appropriate place. If the causes are more then you need to add it as paragraph number 2, and the solutions or effects will be at number 3. If the effects or solutions are more, you can add it at number 3.
Conclusion: The restatement: Restate your answer
Another way to handle a problem/solution essay:
• Make each body paragraph with
a problem and its solution.